What?
I'm sorry, nice drawings, but first of all:
preview your submission on a decent monitor. The whole thing is way too dark and I had to turn my monitor's brightness way up to even see it. Don't worry, it's a mistake we all make though.
Second,
it starts off very promising, but then it ends very abrubtly. It made me ask myself, what is the point of this movie?
All style but no content.